Thursday, 23 August 2012

WALT Make inferences

The Dare
It was a cold icy nightdown in the spooky grave yard,I was sooo frightened.I started getting scared of my own body parts,My heart almost fell out of my body because my teeth were rattling because I thought someone was creeping up behind me.
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4 comments:

  1. Four R.E.N.T.28 August 2012 at 11:05

    I like the way you have used descriptive language.

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  2. Four R.E.N.T.28 August 2012 at 11:06

    I love the discriptive language you have used.

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  3. Anonymous4 September 2012 at 19:34

    The STARsixes read your story this morning Emma and we were all hooked in straight away by the descriptive language you used. We would love to read what happened next. Do you think you might add more to this engaging story? We hope so.
    From all of us in the STARsixes.

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  4. ⋙MaTT⋘™6 September 2012 at 17:57

    Hi Emma, this is Mum.
    Please keep writing this story, was there someone behind you? It sounds scary and is a great piece of writing.

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